Today I saw a movie on HBO channel. The movie is called "Click". It is talking about an architect who named Michael.Michael has a typical middle-class family .He is a workholic because he wanted to give his family a better life.He giving priority of his work and neglecting his family. One day he got a magic remote control , he can use it to control his life.Finally,he realizes the worthwhile parts of his personal life he missed while working, and in the end of his life he lately concludes that the family comes first.
I'm so touched by the movie plot.It also reminds me thinking about what is the most important thing for me.Money is important.But I think family is more important.I 'll cherish now I already have.Don't cry until you lost it. It is useless.
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"Michael has a typical middle-class family" maybe it should be " Michael was bron in a typical middle-class family"
He "is" a workholic because he wanted to give his family a better life-- "was"
He "was" giving priority of his work and neglecting his family.
One day he got a magic remote control , he "can" use it to control his life.--"could"
"I 'll cherish now I already have"--"I will cherish what I have"
Maybe you should notice your problem of tense.
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